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Dear Donald, Coco, Ivy and Winnie,

I've looked through Page 1 to Page 6 of your writing. You're on the right track. Just mind your spelling. It is pleasing to see that you can give comments on each other's writing part and responded quickly and do the revising work. Keep it on!

Remember to include the rest of the pages and the ending!

Cheers,

Miss Wong